All Comments on 'Too Horny To Think Straight'

This story was really hot! It was told at a very moderate past that made you feel a part of the storyline. I hope there will be more of these two. Happy memories.

Please have more stories of them they’re hot animalistic sex and how they actually really care for each other

this isn't even like porn. it's more like high literature

This was very well done indeed very hot and thats a rather bold admisson on my part since im 100% Hetero .......after this story meybe 94% .....lol

I felt a jolt go through me because I'm exactly one of those girls, that was so hot I can't even.

Found your story exciting, if I was alone I would have rub 1 out, or at least a fun tease. Please follow up, loved the characters. The timidness of the 2 dealing with their sexual overcoming could have been drawn out a bit more. Thanks for the chub.

Part two please

Such a pity you never continued. Liked the guys a lot and the sex triggered some of my boxes.

I truly enjoyed your story. The cum play was especially hot. I also liked the fact that both characters played a role, but were not trapped by being dom or sub. That's the way I like it ;-)

XXOO

Wow wow wow wow wow wow. This is like my story xD

Almost didn't make it to the end before shooting a huge load a cum! Fuckin' hot.

crazy mind game turned crazy drugged mind game

MORE!!!

I would love to have the opportunity to watch two guys fuck. It's such a turn on. I wish I could witness this. So hot. I came twice reading this. Thank you :)

Wow that was a hot story, wish I could have been there too. Hot story ;)

You must write more. I think we all can relate in some fashion to a lot of the story. First time is always special among friends. I know mine was:)

How long until the next chapter?

thanks

Really surprised by how much I enjoyed this. Not usually into the insults/dominance, but there was just enough sweetness to carry it off.

fun hot sexy

Hotter than watching porn lol...idk y but that gave me a better boner than anything els...And I'm not a she male XD I'm so weird...

This was a cute story. Although, I could have done without the spitting in mouths and cum-swapping. But the rest was very good. I wish you had written more on this couple. I think they could have made a really good out-in-the-open gay couple, given the chance to grow together.

Wow! Very, very hot! A woman's ultimate fantasy story!

I enjoyed every single word!!! Watching my boyfriend fuck and be fucked by another strait man is my ultimate fantasy!!! I couldn't take my fingers away from my vj for a second while I read your story!!! -incredible :)

You have a talent for story-telling and know how to build tension well. I thought this was very well written and practically flawless. Limited use of passive voice and realistic dialogue made it an enjoyable read. The only thing I would change would be to refrain from using exclamation points in your writing. It comes across as more mature and professional without them.

You really did a wonderful job, though. Your work's impressive and I'll be checking out more of your stories.

Thanks for the great read. :0)

I just wanted to tell you that your story was so hot i love how you went into submissive and talking about the smell of the sweat really brings it home and makes you just go crazy and with every horny detail and it reminds me of myself. please write a sequel i wanna try to break my record of how many times i can shoot.

Enjoyed it alot. I'd be one of the girls watching! Ladyrubytears

This was a great story! I loved the little bit of B and D you put into it. It added a little bit of spice that many stories seem to lack. A sequel is a must!!

with a cock in his ass.

your story got me so stiff.

its hard [pun inteneded] to jerk off and read..

but it does happen.

Got off to this many times, Great story!

This was one of the first stories that inspired me to write my own. Thanks for the hot text.

God, I wish that were me...I have a friend I wish would just have gone down on me...but alas, no one but (ironicly) my girlfriend knows that I'm bi...sigh....oh well. That was an amazing story....really, great job...

Finally, a story that puts two men together in a sexual situation with no labels. Reminds me of my first experience, and it was just as hot. Thanks heaps and keep up the fine writing.

Wow... you HAVE to do the sequel... I'm usually not into gay male but now I'm hooked!

Loved it!, kept me jerking off all day!

This is an excellent story. It had everything plus amazing description of rough sex (loved the spanking part). The way things developed is just perfect.

That was excellent! I got excited from just the pizza, excellent start. Great job! Keep up the work!!

I never was into male on male. Thought I would read it to see what it was about and now Im even hotter than before.

Thank you.

The story started to emerge very slowly. Once it did it exploded with all kinds of erotic details. Love to see more

This story had a slutty eroticism that I like, but also had the non-mushy aspect of finding a strong link between attraction and friendship, to having true feelings for someone. Being bi, it also spoke to me on many levels, without patronizing my lifestyle. Great story!! One of the top ten stories in this category.

I was staight for years now cant get enough of guys love to swallow

I was one of the chicks in the corner spying with one hand in my panties. Had to resist cumming early. Only I didnt like the mouth to mouth cum sharing- unexpected for a first timer. Would like to see more of them soon.

This was hot. The best dirty talk I've heard in a long time. I just about passed out when he called the other guy his "sweet bitch". Good stuff.

This was something else. I agree with Pearl, it was a bit of a jump from the narrator's earlier shy persona to being so nasty and dominating. A smoother transition or explanation would've helped. But other than that... Hot. Great dialogue, nice action. Continue.

I enjoyed it very much; it certainly shows that given the right situation (two guys alone) that straight guys can quickly become bisexual guys who sometimes find that they have really lost interest in girls altogether (thats my case exactly)...keep up the storytelling, I'm sure you have far more readers than are sending comments :)

Great sex, great story, and it leaves me wanting a whole lot more.

Really loved this story. loved the descriptive scenes. Please continue.

great story and sex scenes. I'd like to read more about these two guys, and see what happened if they invited in another guy(s).

More Please.

You got this eager little girl sloshing her pussy in the corner. Chris's early innocence made the dominant dialog a bit unrealistic, but I can't say I didn't like it. More please, and thanks!

write shy, not force

Reminds me fondly of my youth and escapades with good friend to relive sexual tension. Makes me want it to happen again...soon!

This is a well written story that builds well and is exquisitely timed. Word choices are precise and push all the right buttons for the idea of "boy-on-boy" sex without all the somewhat tiresome trappings of gay-ness. The author couldn't resist a few of those gay words and phrases, but kept it to a very few. A very hot story with good excitement mixed with a good level of tenderness and affection -- something all us guys feel for another guy sometime in our lives. This is one of the best such stories I've read on Literotica.com. Well done!

Stories like this are going to push me from being curious to ...........wantin it to happen to me.