All Comments on 'Toofy Ch. 02'

Absolutely fascinating, I don’t think I’ve ever read anything quite like this before.

Tess (uk)

Really enjoying this series so far. I love Toofy as a character but also enjoy Sai. I hope he doesn't fall too far into the background.

Very good continuation , Toofy is a wild one love her.

Fantastic story. Loving every bit of it.

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Really looking forward to reading more....

The second chapter of this tale proves just as absorbing as the first. Leaves the reader with only great expectations. But, the name Toofy??? Regardless, bravos again.

I have to say, this is some of the most high quality writing I've seen on this site. So clever and just, well-written.

Very good, well written and looks to develop really well, I like the idea of a ruthlessly ambitious Neko, never seen that before, so props for originality too! 5* of course!

Excellent story and well written but not to be a "grammar Nazi" but twice you incorrectly used the word "passed" when it should have been "past"... although I freely admit I don't know how to define the proper rules involved when one or the other are to be used... I just know which is right when seeing the context of the sentence they are used in.

I'm spellbound, really looking forward to Twenty Four's path th world domination.

Well done so far! I am extremely intrigued by 24s political movement. The fact that she moved so quickly against Isaac does not surprise me at all, but her movements against the to guests is very humorous to say the least.

I am just surprised that she is moving so quickly after only one day against other lords. Please understand that I am not criticizing, just very interested in the character development.

Well done, and thank you for sharing this story with us! I am looking forward to reading more of it.