All Comments on 'Toofy Ch. 24'

I couldn't have asked for a better ending, wasn't expecting Salmon to show up, but was glad she did. Toofy's story was a great one, and really this is an incredible wrap up. Bittersweet and beautiful.

Great ending. I hope we see more of Toofy in the future.

Great chapter. It almost feels l like the end of book one with book two all set and ready to go. The most serendipitous part of that would be ending the book of lady twenty four on chapter twenty four. Thanks

@ender2k2k - No serendipity here. Ending Toofy on Chapter 24 took _a lot_ of planning and effort. Seriously, it was in the works since before the first chapter appeared.

Fantastic story - loved every second of it.!!

Shame it has to come to and end but as "ender2k2k" comments the ending sounds very much like a great lead in for another epic story :)

Many many thanks for sharing with us :)

Lovely ending,but Toofy wants more. And so do we.

Agrees with ender2k2k. Many interesting bits left in this to be picked up in a new book. Shame Mia couldn't have pulled some magic trick or something at the last moment to give Toofy a fertilized egg and continue the family line. Not like she'd be around when a pissed off Toofy figured it out. lol She swells up preggo again and has to deliver a really big egg. Cursing Mia the whole time. 🤣

outstanding. this has been a great ride.

Goddamn. What a piece of writing.

Damn did I not want this to end , but to all good things… ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Now hopefully with the world building and egg hunt of teasers this last chapter had we'll be reading from this world he's built for some time to come! Like Milton Berle always said "always leave 'em want'n more".

Toofy takes the moon?

Great ending and I loved every bit of it. Hopefully you will give us more of that fabulous Neko in the future.

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Cheers

Congratulations on completing your epic adventure.

The scene of Saia grieving over Tyre's grave was extremely poignant. It was the saddest part of the entire story. While I detest sad endings, you got that one absolutely perfect.

I'll admit that I wasn't going to bother reading this one initially, but my best friend who has adopted me as her big brother is heavily into Neko related stuff. I read this for her so that we could have good conversations about it. But even though I'm not into the genre, I still loved the story. That says a lot about your skills as a writer.

Awesome job! 👏 👍

I have loved every bit of this series and have grown attached to toofy and sai and Saia, I sincerely hope that you continue today's adventures and defy the gods

Bloody Brilliant! Such an epic story and the characters are so easy to love too. Another 5 stars obviously!

Thanks for sharing it.

Tess (uk)

Not the usual type of story I enjoy, but the characters and the world that was constructed is fabulous. Couldn't stop once I started reading.

Such an amazing story, loved every bit of it.

Duper-super epic. Especially enjoyed mix of scenes cut/revisited and scenes allowed to play out to completion in one fell swoop.

Bring Me The Horizon ...

Dam great read. Looking forward to seeing more of your work's.