All Comments on 'Toofy'

Nice! Worldbuilding and characters both

Nice! Hope to see more

5 stars.

I wonder what would have happened if you put this in loving wives instead of nonhuman

Great start. Enjoyed reading this - looking forward to reading more of this story.

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Nice start , it can do nothing but get better.

Look forward to seeing how these two evolve in their relationship to each other. And she with the world. Bravos.

Lovely

Thank You

Thank you for taking the time to make something for our entertainment (for free).

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I waited to comment after getting into this a few chapters. I like it. I like 24's (Toofy's) personality. I'm hopeful about where this will go and it being fun.

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I can see that this will end up being pretty detailed, which is great. Hopefully, you will pin it all together really well so things from chapter 1 will get an "ah-hah" in some much later chapter.

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Very much looking forward to reading all the chapters and hopefully more to come.

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5* from me.

I'm not really into the Furry kink. But I have a close platonic girl friend who is. (The space is an important distinction. She's not my girlfriend, in spite of the fact that I would gladly accept her as such if she chose.) I'm going to recommend this to her and I'm sure she'll get deep into it. For me, I gave it 4 stars 🌟 simply because I'm not into Furry. Otherwise, it's written well enough to keep me interested strictly on a Sci-fi/Fantasy basis.

"We won't get passed play."

Past. In this context past is an adverb. Passed is a verb, and play is the verb in your sentence. Substitute past with beyond and this might make things easier to understand: "We won't get beyond play." See how that makes sense?

Great interplay between the characters, nice stereotypically sparky female bending male to her will as she schools him through fucking. Look forward to hot sex scenes!

Love it! I particularly like the element of fun that subtly is such a strong thread.