All Comments on 'Top and Bottom Rolled in One'

The foreign sentence structure of the language in this story made it a bit hard to read (realize author is probably not a native English speaker), but what really dropped the floor out of this story was the inclusion of shit and brown cum mix after anal fucking and the licking and clean up and subsequent rimming of the same. No need to include that filthiness unless you’ve tagged the story as such to warn readers. Too extreme!

I have always desired to hookup with a young Indian and the manner of the meeting was intriguing and erotic to say the least and could not have been accomplished in any other cultural milieu. The spit would not have happened at first kiss but here it led into the accepting and exchange of excreta then again it is a good story.