All Comments on 'Top Bloke'

by PapaTez01

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer5 months ago

Interesting story and well written, but it doesn't indicate whether this is just the first chapter. Since there were no lingering questions, only a bit of awkwardness it's not a necessity, but this definitely left me wanting to know more.

PapaTez01PapaTez015 months agoAuthor

I am planning a series after a friend said he wanted more, but the initial story was conceived as a one-shot. I do like the vague ending, however. Sometimes life be like that.

JRSONJRSON5 months ago

It's good to see the author may continue this one!

After orgasm confusion and possible regret between close friends! This dismal, lacking, ending almost requires another chapter or more. It's obvious these guys care about each other. Hopefully they can sort things out.

PapaTez01PapaTez015 months agoAuthor

Roger that. I want to knock out my other series first, then I can give Top Bloke more attention.

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Keeping it all together with a frayed shoelace and a prayer. In my stories I hope to explore themes of male physical intimacy and emotional vulnerability. I also explore the nuances of fluid sexuality, curiosity, and exploration.