All Comments on 'Tormented Ch. 16'

i love this series! really hope that you'll carry on as it needs to be finished, bringing in i would love to know more about daida and cant wait to see how everything turns out with the angels! ryans story is amazing and their relationship is incredible! please update again soon!

Thank you so much and thank you for sticking with Lily and Ryan this long! When I first started this story I had no idea it would get this kind of reception and would like to thank everyone for reading! Any comments are very welcome and love hearing how I could make this better or any ideas of where it could go! If you are interested in reading more about Daida and her story I have another story in this category called 'Protector' which gives you her history and her story so far. Again thank you so much everyone for reading and I hope you enjoy the next chapter, I'm working on it now and it should by uploaded soon! Fallen x

I read the Protector,and it was more or less left unfinished,and said if we wanted to read more on daida,to read this story,which was more of a fuck fest than story,,i was hoping for more involvement with daida,,I really enjoyed the Protector,and this one was a let down,,,wish you would add more to the Protector,was a very disappointing ending,,and keep getting shuffled back to that story,,not a real sequal,,

This is a great story...you should really consider finishing it.