All Comments on 'Torrie's Year'

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Why in the fuck do all white men in your stories have small dicks. Cuz we don't you know.

Racist shit.

This follows up Torrie and Eddie as secondary characters. Fab Rob has his comeuppance. Torrie has her redemption and Eddie gets her back. :)

Don't waste your time.

Every character, every plot device every sex scene is contrived and stupid.

Probably the worst story I have ever read on this site.

Awful.

For its genre, this story is outstanding. It’s well-written and sexually provocative. However, it ignores the elephant in the room, the one opponent that Torrie can’t seduce into submission - Father Time. By the epilogue, she is pushing 40. Before long, her looks will be gone, and she will be passed over by the men she wants for younger women. (Is she so stupid that she doesn’t realize this?). By that time, Eddie would have likely matured to the point that he’d be able to see his mother for what she is - a depraved emotional cripple who has genuine contempt for her son and is just using him. He’d totally cut Torrie out of his life, leaving her to grow old alone and unloved. There’s the realism this story needs to be believable. I know it’s just fantasy, but a reader has to be able to suspend disbelief to get into any kind of narrative.

I'd a gotten a shotgun and shot ALL of them in their crotches. Everyone of them starting with Torrie, then Eddie, Fat Rob, Darrell, Marcus, etc...

Of course people will still read your old stuff. They see one of your newer stories as it appears on the incest or interracial main page and decide to explore your older work. That's how I ended up reading most of your stuff. That and you never know where the literotica search function will take you... the horrors I have seen...

This story is so good keep writing more like just like this. I love how the mom became sluttier and sluttier and eventually stopped caring is she got caught. Awsome story.

This is easily your best story. If you can make another one similar to it, then that would be great. Regardless, I absolutely loved how erotic and catchy it was. Please continue it with something similar.

And the part when she goes to talk to her son in his room...I came all over myself.

I loved this story and would love to see more stories like it. I love the mom being black cock only and the son being humiliated as well as turned on by it.

Great story and I would love to see more like it.

I learned the same thing last year.

This is a really good story. It was well developed. Long before you had Torrie getting caught by her husband I knew it was headed that way. I loved the bar scene with Eddie. Too bad Torrie did not go off birth control and have Fat Rob breed her like she needed. Every white girl/woman needs to have at least one black baby, preferably two.

I for one thought that this story was excellent and I hope to see more like this in the future for you. I'd love to see something involving a mother/son's bully concept.

What is the problem here. Most of you Anonymous morons (too ashamed to give a name to their drivel) don't read properly. The Authors note at the beginning says it is based on a some truth and a lot of fantasy. Read it for what it is; a story. You have no idea how much is true and how much is not.

I bet most of you on here have had a fantasy of fucking someone other than your partner whether married or not. It may be a black cock it may be your son, daughter, mother, father or whoever, and those of you who have actually done it, I bet your partner is unaware in most cases.

I reckon a lot of the stories here in a good number of categories are based on true stories but the Author is not going to admit that whether it is based on them or someone else.

As for myself, I don't give a fuck about who does what to whom. I am on here to read erotic stories in a variety of categories. If I don't like them I give up part way through and go on to the next. Its a lot easier doing that than wasting time venting your stupidity anonymously

This story is well written and probably has more reality than some of these other readers want to acknowledge. Keep on writing!!

All I can say is that was like a train wreck you can't stop looking to see if it could ever be worse. I like the ending that someone else wrote about how Eddie did not want anything to do with this cum dumpster.

Use her again in a new story.

called:::who's the sickest. TK U MLJ LV NV

cant believe I read it all, guess I was hoping for .........

fuck if I know.... 4 and I cant say why .