All Comments on 'Toss'

I liked it.

Chapter 2 please about them raising a family.

but good

You have sketched out an interesting relationship between two interesting people. That isn't easy to do. So, congratulations!

I hope you write more because you have an interesting voice. I have overused the word because it is the opposite of boring and even death is better than boring.

R.

I agree with the previous comments. I too found it “interesting,” different, and I like it. These are two complex and weird characters. You’ve developed them well in a short time. I can’t say that I “like“ either of the characters, but I do like the story and I’d like

to hear more from them. 5* for sure from me.

As always, thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Great story, I hope you add another chapter or two. You made me think about my preteen years, and the fun I had with girls that thought they were in charge. Five Stars!

Great story with a nice pace. Looking forward to more of your work.

Thanks