All Comments on 'Total Control Pt. 01: Hooked'

I'm with you; I want to tie a guy down and totally control his orgasm. I love watching cum control videos and imagine being the dominant partner, to bring a guy to an explosive ejaculation.

Very nice of Eli_Dreams to share this story with us! I can feel with him. I always put myself in the role of the protagonists of porn videos. For example, in the winner of wrestling match, who is afterwards allowed to fuck the loser. I do hope the author can act out his dreams in reality.

Simple but effective.

When I read 'husband', I immediately assumed that the storyteller was a woman, but, of course, in this day and age, both husbands can be male!

This irritated me a little, because I found it hard to imagine a woman being interested in such a scenario. Nevertheless, this story is well-written and well-paced and I fell compelled to award 5 stars.

@fermat Thank you for a 5!

If you read my bio you will see why there might be some ambiguity about the storyteller's sex. I was planning to introduce it in later chapters, never realizing that it was already there loud and clear right in the opening sentence! Oh well, hope I did not scare away too many readers.

As for women being interested in this type of scenarios... I think some of them are, at least in the BDSM world -- there are quite a few videos of this type with a Madam in place of a Master. I have no statistics on who is watching them more, but based on the comments would guess that at least some of the viewers are female.