All Comments on 'Total Focus'

Did a painting about 1895?

In it is a young lass holding a tar pot.

At the end of her long life she told my aunt about the painting her (my aunt's) father was in.

The image of my grandfather is so much like my eldest brother at that age.

(14_16?)

My father, his son is now 96 nearly 97.

A mystery for you a great story teller.

Cheers

Great story! I think this should be in humor category.

5

Not even funny enough to qualify for humor. Skimming it didn't take too long and this author has done good things in the past so I stuck with it when I should have shit-canned it. Emphasis on "past". 2*

Would have liked to see the pushy girl entirely ignored instead of this. No empathy with the protagonist so no interest in the tale.

I totally understand the Proffesor. I used the same notes for forty years of lecturing. The total focus idea is an excellent idea. I was close to this until I had to start using glasses. Very enjoyable.

I enjoyed the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++

A great smile on my face reading it. And a great envy not being in his place. A lovely story of strong love between strong people!! You don't stop to surprice us readers. Don't mind the wankers that are afraid of intelligent strong women ;-) Love to see more!