All Comments on 'Total Submission'

Vivid, with interesting characterization. I like the interplay between them. Thank you for sharing.

Any Master/Husband is going to be VERY Proud of His Submissive Woman to take His Extreme Punishment, Well Deserved! Her Orgasm's were a Great Surprise for Her and She Took his Cock Completely to Complete His Total Domination! Great Story!

Five stars!

Where is the parity? Can he truly take what he dishes out? I seriously doubt it. Where is the allowance for a safe signal? This goes too far past the threshold of sane. It's not love, it is abuse. Period.

I know anymouse won't see this, but I've taken some severe spankings. It was a long drive back home. He was not angry, but was calm and collected as he should be. I don't think I want to do that again. A great story and yes it's amazing what sort of stimulus can trigger an orgasm. The pain and the pleasure is what makes it work. Also, the TLC afterwards is worth so much. Bravo

He sounds like a sadist does she realise I don’t get how u can want to seriously damage someone ure meant to love I get spankings totally but forcing someone to deep throat who’s had no training is not only cruel but extremely dangerous an it’s done under the fear of more intense pain he’s not a Dom or any bdsm titles as this is not safe sane or consensual cos as I explained the deep throat was dangerous therefore not safe or sane so consensual then becomes shaky at best an if it not consensual then it’s abuse simple as that

Nice dynamic between them and well written set up. You lost me at penetrating the cervix though, that’s a one way door and isn’t meant to be opened except in childbirth and it’s hurts like hell.

No one can continuously gag an not throw up it’s a normal reflex these sentences always annoy me they live in some alternate reality

This is truly a fantasy. The penis can not penetrate the cervix into the womb. The cervix can only be touched (stimulate) by the penis. The term associated with this is deep penetration.