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by Damianthesilverwolf

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
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a Proof Reader AND an Editor!

DamianthesilverwolfDamianthesilverwolfalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Really

This is just a hobby and you felt that your comment was needed for a few grammatical errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Critic

Everyones a critic.... dont let it bother you.

Loving the story.

I like Jordan, I'm wondering what's going to happen with Mary... what's the story with the verbally abusif mother? Anyways, Mary does deserve happiness.

Going to read your following chapter.

Keep at it.

Josie : )

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To my followers out there I am working on a piece but it’s going to take some time and be kinda long so hope it will be worth the wait.

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