All Comments on 'Tour of Duty'

What horrible disrespect to serving soldiers overseas.

Scores 1/5

Fckn hot!!!!

Disrespecting serving soldiers is out

1/5

Always liked MMF, nice touch with father and son.

Loved it! Good story, MDM!

Very hot. Arousing. I’ve enjoyed DP sex with a few father / son combinations. So sexy, so taboo, so hot.

Another day, another pathetic cuck story about a beta and bis gutter slut wife.

Since Mark and his wife had an amicable divorce, maybe it would be a GOOD IDEA to rekindle that relationship and wind up with a hot foursome. Plenty of potential for carnal mixing here. Hot. Can't wait for the next episode.

While this was a super hot story and I understand that normal rules are ignored for porn stories, I couldn't help but wonder who was home with their young daughter while the daughter in law is over at "Daddy's" house sucking him off? And the daughter must have been what with all the screaming in the house.

Hot sex but just couldn't get my head around the latter part with the father/son routine. 4*

Good story. Kept wondering where her daughter was throughout.

Great story, short and hot. I eagerly wait for your every story. Keep writing short stories like this.

I like your style

It's not an incest, but a generic japanese-father-in-law copycat story pretending not be a cuck garbage.

Hot. Simply hot, AF.

Keep her in the family. Better than her running around getting it from someone else.

Nice job just the right length to get the job done

Loved the story, but don't forget the baby! She drove to his house alone? Child neglect.

I hate stories where the wife is child like. Keep your perversion to yourself you pedophile

you did actually lose tons of my interest after this - - husband tells the wife go fuck his father ( i'm still

gonna proceed only because you the author this . your always bringing hits )

Add pregnancy.

That was hot! Excellent short story!

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I agree with @wargamer - total disrespect for military members. As a vet I take this VERY personally. Granted this is an erotic site and fiction, but PLEASE be respectful to serving members of the military. Also only 1 star.

God so 🔥!!! I love the ending father and son dping the same woman. Hot as fuck! I can't wait to read chapter 2. Although I was curious about the baby too and who she was with.

So damn hot

Where’s part 2?

Loved it

Boring. Couldn’t you fill in more depth- character development? This could be a movie someday for crime sake!

To those of you wondering about the baby.Picture if you will Maggie Simpson sitting in her high chair with eyes as large as saucers and the pacifier rapidly tk tk tk tk tking in her mouth.Welcome to my mind.

I really want a sequel, where Kara is shared by her two men

STORY ENDED TOO SOON....NEEDS MORE OF THIS 3SOME DP

Sick and stupid.

Sick and fucking stupid for 1 is a disrespect to husbands in the military 2 the husband disrespected his wife cause no damn man would be ok with his wife fucking his dad if she really loved her husband like she claimed she would have never fucked her father in law it's simple she never loved her husband that is why she cuckold her husband and fucked his dad then sent a video of it to him basically saying fuck her comment to her husbands dad saying fuck me baby and breed me was all the proof needed that she didn't love her husband

Too grandeagle53 I agree that it is a total disrespect to military members more so military husbands I am also a military vet marine corps for me

I'm offended by these people who liked this shit as a military vet myself you people who are saying you loved the story all you are doing is disrespecting the military members and former military members I get that it is your right but you seem to forget that it is people like myself another reader grandeagle53 and many others on how you even have that right we don't ask for much of anything but we deserve your respect

Yeah it be shouldn't be war criminals

I wouldn't have minded this story if when he got home, he said to his wife. "Oh by the way, there's a girl I've been on tour with who was my lover. I don't love her it's just physical. I'm also thinking of going to find your mother and doing the same with her. You don't mind, do you?"

LOL!!!

Pretty good for a banal panty fetish story - Oh yeah, blowing and fucking the FIL is not incest -

Bye the way. I neglected to mention in my previous comment that I'm a retired military veteran of 26 years . . . .