by Eroscribe67
You said if was twelve inches, then eight, then back to twelve... wtf? Please be consistent in your lengths. Other than that, it was good
It may be a short tale but boy it's very sexy. Some tales can be far too short and some can be far too long.
This tale is the perfect length and a lovely story too. I really emphasized with both Jenny and Cal.
Lovely. Please post more.
This story is right u my alley, and it's so well-written. I envy a couple who can be so open and fun! Great job!