by Firsttimewriting
It's great to see the progression in your ability to tell a story - i know it's just erotic literature but the effort you put into crafting a storyline is above and beyond. Your writing also keeps getting better and better with each new story and chapter. Just wanted to let you know that it is appreciated
Thanks for that feedback, really appreciate you taking the time to do that. Glad to hear people enjoy what I am writing, makes it very satisfying to do it then.
So now we have a name. Where could this Gerry Butterman be? And what if he's been watching her this entire time? o_O
Great work on this chapter.
Incredible story so far! What if the killer captures her? So many possibilities! Keep up the great work!
Seriously, I agree with a previous comment, the username doesn't match the quality of your writing skills. Hope this story has a few more chapters coming, I keep looking forward to the next one.
Sorry about the delay between updates. Have been quite ill the last few weeks and am only recovering now.
The next part is written and I am just waiting for the editing to be completed. So hopefully will post it soon.