All Comments on 'Traditions Ch. 06'

Please hurry back! I need some more, I have been checking your page like a crazy to see if there were any updates. I just love this story!!

I am so sorry you guys! I titled the chapter wrong! It's obviously suppose to be chapter four. I'm going to re-submit it with the correct name. Please vote and comment. :)

Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what happen when Cheyanne and Declan see each other again . More updates please . But I understand school comes first . :)

Finally! Great update and progress with Declan I was about to go off due to his bratty attitude...lol but I get it and it is good that he is finally opening up. It is good that Cheyanne is patient and is being let in. I can't wait to see what is in store foe these two because their battle isn't nearly halfway over. Great job!

I love this story.

I like that you have taken it slow with them and they haven't jumped into bed with each other yet. It seems more real that way. I want a Declan of my own!!!

This story is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site! Please keep up your wonderful writing because you have talent!!

Finish! Finish! Finish!

Honeyblood, I am loving your characters, the storyline, and the way you've set everything up. Very creative indeed and it has a genuine feeling to it. I like that you haven't rushed the sex like a lot of stories. You seem to have invested a lot of time and thought into what you want this story to be in the end product. I really am enjoying this story a lot. By the way you do know that it says Ch. 6 right? LOL

Can't wait to read the next chapter you have me on the edge of my seat. Syn'

Love your story and have been waiting patiently for an update. You didn't disappoint. I'm so into their "brand new love". You can feel the excitement and innocence, as well as the passion, when you read. I a DYING to see what happens when she returns to England.

Please, don't make us wait for long :)

Thanks again for the update and I will continue to check for more.

Take care!

This is a very good series and I hope you continue to write, your writing is really effortless...So please continue this fabulous story and update

Please update again soon ! Love this story .

Update please I'm dieing here!!!!

This such a nice story please update now

Honeyblood until you reslove the chapter situation with Literotica,continue to update this stotryon your blog. Please don't keep us hanging.

so I have too toyourblog in order to finish this story? ch 4 is repeated in ch. 6, even though you said it was corrected or so. Literotica would not let you repeat? maybe I misunderstood. I am enjoying the story, unique. So I guess I am forced to go to your blog if I want story closure. well please do not stop writing, your story is a nice reprieve from the stupid immature black girl sex craved selfish white boy he did me wrong story line. thank you for your uniqueness.

I can't wait for Declan to tell his parents about his girlfriend. You did a great job with the fight just wish it had another outcome.

I hope to see that this chapter is resolved soon! But I am loving the story line so far i hope it's as exciting, hot, and romantic as it is right now! We're waiting! xD

Im going crazy here waiting for chapter 7

But she is just a little selfish. It's one thing I can't stand and that's a selfish lover.

I understand she isn't ready, and she shouldnt do anything that she is not ready to do, but she could have given him a handjob or a blowjob or something. Hell, she could have ridden him to completion with both of their underthings and pants/shorts on. I was once a 19 year old virgin too and there are definitely ways to get the job done without getting the job done.

Where is #7?!?!?!? HOP TO IT! ;)

Even though I read this a little late I still can't wait until the next chapter.... please don't be like some authors and NOT finish this story.... Please I need more!!!

You've got something special going with this story. Please don't leave it as it is! I hope you gain inspiration to write again soon. I'll be checking your blog for updates as well

I'm hooked

More, please.

Please finish this story don't leave us hanging. This stry is one of the best I have read on here. I have to agree with another comment below she could have at least given him a handjob!

Please, we all need more at least I know I do, thank u in advance

I didn't like the fact that you haven't added to this story in over a year; seriously?

I hate the story is not complete yet.

You dont deserve any of their negative comments. Your story is amazing and i absolutely adore it. I am sad that you havent updated in a year but i am not mad at you for that. Life happens. So just forget what they say

I understand that life happens; however, I do hope you complete this story. It would be interesting to find out if his parents will except her or not. Also, if Declan will take the trip across the pond to meet her parents.

So, are you done with this story?

Please come back

Please come back and update. I'm so in love with this story.

You have to finish this like omg. And work on your spelling.

I check back all the time... Love this story... Chey an Declan are soooo cute!! You have to finish please...

love this story, check for updates and re-read it all the time... please update!!!

I have never enjoyed a story so much. This is off the chain. It has so much cultural differences and the characters related on a different level. I would like to know what Declan's parents think of Cheyanne and how she fit into his culture. In this day and time a man as HOT & SEXY as Declan would be a Playboy, Cassonova, Romeo, and a man ho all rolled into one. I think it is awesome that he is such a gentleman but some good sex scenes never hurt a good love story. Way to go!!!

It have been over four years since you post a chapter. Are you coming back to finished.

Great story, but definitely needs an editor. “...his BRAD chest led to his washer board AS.” Alrighty then.

Shame this never got finished

Great story, wish you would finish it. Its so different yet so good. More Please !