All Comments on 'Traditions - Hollywood and Mine'

Well it is a really well written story , you mentioned Rick was 21 and yet portrayed him as a confused, bashful 12 year old. I am not sure why authors do that but it upsets me and costs them stars.

Enjoyed the read. For sure hot sex but will he be able to keep having sex with his sister and cousin and not grow emotional connection? You dropped us into the middle of "something" and that, in retrospect, was a little disorienting. Be nice for a second chapter... 5*

I love vacations. Thanks for a great story.

Hot story!!!!! Well done!!! ;)

Damn I really loved this chapter! Sure hope you decide to write more about this.....Please please please! Excellent work