All Comments on 'Traditions - Summer Vacation'

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BentNotBrokenBentNotBrokenover 3 years ago
Very well done!

Great story telling... the buildup was well crafted, as was the anticipation. Characters are believable and fleshed out. Next xhapter?

Gary13Gary13over 3 years ago

More? VERY good, so far.

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 3 years ago
Loving Siblings

This is a well written story of to nurture siblings that are horny and want to play but not they should get to carried away. The fear of getting caught adds to the story. It’s calling out for a continuation of the vacation and or the brother -sister affair. Thank You!

RodThrustinRodThrustinover 3 years ago
Also!

What Bentnotbroken said, plus, it was well-written. And well crafted--few if any typos, spelling or grammar errors, etc. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A good story...I am waiting for the next chapter

sabra16023sabra16023over 3 years ago
Great Story

Calls for more chapters. Thanks

Want2CUMMWant2CUMMover 3 years ago
Great story

Hope there's more fun to be had on this family vacation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Next chap bro

Gary13Gary13over 3 years ago

Just re-read it. Still VERY good! I hope there's more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I loved how Andrea made you untie here bra in the car! So clever!

tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
THE NAUGHTY SISTER WHO IS NOW LEGIT has

a small issue about nursing big bro on her tits. TK U MLJ LV NV

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