All Comments on 'Tradwife for Life'

Hilarity coupled with eeriness. “Leave It to Beaver” without the kids and with outrageous sex. You’re crazy (P.P.S.) fantasy on paper it would seem. Love your imagination; you transcribe it into characters and storylines so well.

Thanks for the kind words @migbird! I'm so glad that you liked it!

More of the transformation would have been great.

Great story structure; well told.

What a story. I agree with the other anon that more of the transformation would have been perfect, but… otherwise your writing is superb. I could picture everything perfectly. Zoe’s doubts and apprehension were excellently dismantled even before the drugs started to take hold. Dorothy is very persuasive.

Thanks again for the kind words! Yeah, I wasn't completely satisfied with the transformation myself, but I also try to limit my stories to around 4,000 words (as a reader, I start to lose interest when erotica is much longer than that). I think there's probably a whole extra story about Zoe...I mean "Betty's" training in the coming days and weeks, following her impregnation, but I wanted to keep this one relatively short. I might consider a follow up if enough people request it :)

Wow, I loved this! It's so well written and its rare to find a story that hits so many of my preferences and kinks perfectly! Can't wait to read more of your stories, especially if you make any sequels (ie the transformation, more impregnation talk, etc)

really great writing! would love to see a follow up, thanks!

Liked this. Will there be a Chapter 5 to "She Who Controls The Past" ?

Really loved this story! Hope to see more like this in the future

That was rather fun, echoes of stepford wives..

Any more news on this story extension?

Omg this is amazing! I'd love a sequel

This is a really unique take on the subject matter. As someone who writes in the space myself I would love to see this expanded on. It was/is very good.