All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Rita Ch. 44'

Good call on the POV switch, I think it worked better than having them recount to John keeping his POV. Really love where series is heading!

Good chapter with hot Sex but was hoping for more. build up to a nothing ending. Hope next chapter has more if not then sadly disappointed in the LA visit. Huge let down.

No Words can do this chapter justice. It was just that good. But transmogrified is an excellent description. A great setting for two whores being full out whores for power cocks and giving it their all. And Jess giving up all three of her holes. Jess was the star of this chapter for sure. She is the best coke whore any of them have ever seen. Jess wins the day by far. She is the one that gets the gold medal of sexual Olympics. Love the length of this story and I know that takes A LOT OF TIME and skill. It was very well written with outstanding storytelling. Thanks for writing and publishing. Cheers

Jess did overdose amounts of coke. She’s going to have a nose like Stevie Nicks. If her ass is so worn out Peter should have fisted her and made it prolapse.

Kat has a revelation. Stephan is actually a good guy, he just likes games. Stephan saved Kat from herself. Who will do that for her next time. As long as there are drugs and cocks she is in the danger zone and she won’t stop the temptation to cheat forever. I cannot imagine Kat as a mother. She’s going to breast feed the kid an eight ball every day.

You are an amazing writer, thanks a lot for sharing this with us. 5 stars!

I agree that Jess needs fisting, sex and cocaïne is all she's good for. Kat will cheat again, although I don't think it will be with Stephen. That relationship/infatuation seems over for both them.

I knew Kat was once again going to cheat onJohn