All Comments on 'Traffic Jam'

Great story, I loved reading it and judging by the ending I'm hoping there's more to com!

I like what you've done so far and the writing is good. I think I only saw one little boo-boo. And these stories where someone is taken but finds they love it... too good. Sometimes fear is a huge turn on. That sometimes happens with fantasies.

4 stars.

one of the hottest things i've ever read. MORE. NOW.

i have read a lot of stories on here over the years and this by far is one of the all time best i hope it comes a series

An excellent first story

I like it, but as already said, stretch out the fear. Build up enjoyment slowly. Words like wonderful at the beginning lack believability. Keep writing, heaps of potential.

This was a good setup story.