All Comments on 'Traffic Jam'

This was a good setup story.

I like it, but as already said, stretch out the fear. Build up enjoyment slowly. Words like wonderful at the beginning lack believability. Keep writing, heaps of potential.

An excellent first story

i have read a lot of stories on here over the years and this by far is one of the all time best i hope it comes a series

one of the hottest things i've ever read. MORE. NOW.

I like what you've done so far and the writing is good. I think I only saw one little boo-boo. And these stories where someone is taken but finds they love it... too good. Sometimes fear is a huge turn on. That sometimes happens with fantasies.

4 stars.

Great story, I loved reading it and judging by the ending I'm hoping there's more to com!