by RetrospectiveInsomnia
Great story but damn your killing us with how long you’re dragging this story out, just put us out of our misery..
These chapters are repetitive. Repetitive. Repetitive.
Magical dicks and doormat women.
I agree with the above comments. "Shit or get off the pot" this is a wonderful story if you don't use a sleeping pill. Either sell them break them or release them.
I'm not into the end game here - repetitive, endlessly predictable torcher .. That's it? At least either let her get her bloody revenge or move on to the pleasures of a sex slave. Maybe consider that later can involve intermittent bursts of extreme pleasure without correlation to any stimulus. The motivation to 'be a good slave' for that unpredictable reward can be powerful and seductive as hell.
Would love to see the girls forced to do things to each other. Really get in their heads!
Loving the series.
Well, yes, the chapters are way too short. We just get into a scene when it just ends. A chapter just gets interesting, then stops. Too bad, the story would be a good one but the chapters should be combined to create a better representation of what happens during slave training.