All Comments on 'Train Encounter'

A great story, perfectly paced and well written. Definitely had to fan myself a couple times whilst reading.

I thought it was a great story with a good plot, Two average travelers who were teasing each other until She threw down the gauntlet and asked for what She knew He was dying to get His hands on. The ending was better than I could of imagined. Thank You for Your efforts and I encourage You to write more and write often.

This is a great story for those of us with a foot fetish. I was hooked from the beginning. Needless to say, I was immensely turned on. Thank you.

Thank you for your kind comments everyone, the second chapter is pending now, so please be sure to give it a read when it comes out. If you have any ideas about where the story might go, please let us know as it's always good to hear others' perspectives

I love female feet. I thought your story was well written and good. The foot/ cock play was great. I think your chapter 2 should have them in a different season maybe more casual. Her in a summer sun dress and open thong sandals, toe rings, pedicure. Him in shorts and t shirt. Maybe he goes all the way and sucks her toes as he fucks her. Don't get me wrong I loved your story. I just got excited, not all the way though. You deserve 5s just give us some shrimping action.

Great story!

I love feet too. Foot jobs rick!

Great story!

I love feet too.

Foot jobs rock!

I would definitely give in to every desire of this beautiful woman just to feel her soles all over me. I adore the female foot.

Ticklishsoles

I'm not really into feet, but a nice story. From my vantage point, however, there needed to be some action/involvement with other body parts. Certainly, when she had her foot between his legs on the seat, there could have been some views of her panty covered pussy.

Perhaps she even could have touched herself while getting him off with her feet. Dialog would have been hot as she told him how hot she was. How wet she was. How good she smelled. Etc.

And what about her breasts? Nothing but how her dark bra was visible through her blouse. Why not?

Has super potential, but didn't live up to that potential. I gave it four stars.