by yellowjacket66
Ridiculous
Chinese people don't behave in this way, nor protest as described, they just don't care like that. Turn it around, a Chinese couple on an American train, it would make sense. 5 hours on a train from western China to the coast? Not a chance and you would fly in any case. Otherwise the writing was good
just groping is kind of lame. Sorry, hope there is another part with another train ride that gets a whole lot more explicit
Uninspired, written like a police report. They did this, then they did that, then they did this again and so on. This is an outline of a story.
This merely demonstrates that you have never been on a Chinese train in your life. Your desciption fits no train in China. You cannot get from the west of China to the east coast in 5 hours, either.
And Chinese people would never act the way you describe. This is racist drivel.
Nice story, I love thinking about my wife in situations like that and her submitting to the situation. She’s Asian so you can add the thrill the men would get knowing they were using a white mans wife.