All Comments on 'Train to Schmertzylvania'

by JorisKHuysmans

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent Short Story

Only wished it were longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I agree - only one thing wrong

Not long enough. Very fun read!

justboycrazyjustboycrazyalmost 17 years ago
Very well written

I loved this story--wished it a little longer. Anyways, I loved how you have a BBW story in a historical setting. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great fun, but take us all the way on a slow coach next time!

Entertaining writing, nicely imagined setting and characters, great build-up, love the frump-to-vixen transformation, but we get off the train too soon - left me wanting to ride all the way to Schmertzylvania and back!

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