All Comments on 'Training Exercise'

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NyissaNyissaover 2 years ago

Nice first story... got me wet... can't wait for the next...

AlexaDrakeAlexaDrakeover 2 years ago

Why have none of the first aid classes I attended ever turned out this interesting? Great start to your story collection here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry, But as a former emergency responder I just saw too many errors. And it killed the story for me. But for the average person it may be just fine.

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Just an everyday guy trying my hand out at some steamy writing. Follow me on Twitter for everyday musings @MyOwnErotica