All Comments on 'Training Hard Ch. 01'

Half the time all he did was throw people around

What a waste.

the idea is not bad. Change how you are writing the story.

This is a joke - right.

A parody of cliche, absurdism, vacant plot?

Hilarious!!

Yeah... this was trash

... i kinda like it... the sexy bits.... it's very to the point.... the gun is a bit much, especially the hitting with it is too much.... but with a little re-write this could be really hot.... i got into the training that was mentioned.... maybe a second chapter on that....