All Comments on 'Training Tim Ch. 03: Final Exams'

It was a really good story the way you started right up to the end.

A good way to finish with everyone happy.

Very well written erotica! Thank you for sharing this with us! I hope there will be more of this to see how everything turned out!

It was really good and hot to read, hot enough to get me to the edge!

I think though you might benefit from having an editor - you described Tim as ‘a quick study’ 3 times and it seemed a bit odd. In the first chapter Tonya was at the centre of the swing club gang bang with enviable blowjob skills. By chapter two, Rebecca was the only one who could deep throat him. Regarding Doris, I am pretty sure that after a hysterectomy the vagina doesn’t become a bottomless, open ended tube! So that was a bit of a blunder. And, in chapter 3, some the dialogue from Timmy seemed to become too sophisticated.

What delightful story, well told!