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Lots of love, and I'll see you for my next publication,
JC
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Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI am still really not sure how I feel about what happened to MIA. It makes it a bit better now knowing that it was so she could be “used” in a different story ark if that is what happened but still, she came to thank chance and he just hands her over. Feels kinda scummy but hey you sorta do what you gotta do for love, other then that this story has been amazing and I don’t want it to end.
Lenny20about 3 years agoI already had suspicions after realising, that BBA and TRANCE are in the same universe, but finally knowing that Natalie from BBA is actually Mia from TRANCE was just mind-blowing.
This is one of the very few stories with this many parts that have stayed at a 5-star-level from start to finish. And things like this reveal make it all the better.
Also I hope, this wasn't the last time Chance sees Terra, because the scenes with her always were just awesome! (and not hyperbole speaking, they were really excellent)
Anonymousover 3 years agoIt's fascinating to find out that Mia ended up becoming Natalie that we know from the other series. I think that's an excellent tie up. Also, I believe I can expect Chance to get together with Terra for some fun soon, to "rectify" the accord since it needs to include and protect Chance but currently isn't. I skipped about 10 chapters after chapter 5 as I thought there wasn't much plot direction, but I'm thrilled at how the last 5 chapters changed my mind!
Anonymousover 3 years agoI appreciate the story arc you have built for chance. Given an amazing opportunity he was self-centered and shallow. Then yes his conscience began to work on him. I think his concerned that once he has freed his harem of their mind control they will leave him is going to provide his greatest moral character Development moment. Will he love them enough to truly give them back their freedom to choose? Will he risk losing the people he has fought for so hard? he has chosen the women he cares for over the lives of countless others. In a way still selfish, And yet given the cost to his own “Soul“ self sacrificing at the same time. The question remains will he give up what he loves to do right by those he loves?
greasedsilverover 3 years agoI thank you so much for this chapter and yet wonder... just how you manage to keep me at the edge of my seat with your cliff-hangers! You do have a gift, sir!
