All Comments on 'TRANCE, Inc. 01: The Actress'

I liked the post hypnotic suggestion almost as much as the sex scenes. Thanks!

I loved your first chapter and look forward to many more.

While it appears we’ll see various chapters with various actresses, can you also write one that tells how the hypnosis came to be (I.e. stumbles on the corporate secret / methodology - an origin story)?

Another good story. Has a lot of potential. Having your story (or sub-story) at 2 pages or around 4000 words maybe a bit limiting. The story might benefit with some more length and allow the pace to be somewhat slower thereby allowing a slower build up or some added tease. Just a thought.

Quality Check just got a whole new meaning.

I love how it didn't work at first. Puts a real challenge to the story.

And the idea that someone in that crappy of a job got that much of a bonus is a huge smile on my face lol

I love how you started it. Really grabbed my... attention ;)

Can't wait to read more of the story.

That was great! =)

Really liked this one.

You can help me...

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A great story so far! How many guys have watched a porn movie wishing to be able to command the starlet to do this!

Great story, loving it

5/5

"...(t)hat their products were the widely held to be..."

Hey. Just following links between stories, & found the above mistake!