All Comments on 'Transcendent Ch. 01'

Really unusual but really hot.

Looking forward to ch2.

Really amazing writing. I thought this was a great way to do something new that isn't the same old story you find on here. Lots of funky psychological stuff to analyze and pleasant detail. Keep it coming!

Very Well written . Is this hell or just a nightmare. Especially as he was on a border between extreme pleasure and pain w/ Delilah. Descending may have been a better title choice but I know it's early & the plot is still unfolding. I don't understand the crows and the butt fucking . Are they allegorical ? or will that become clear in subsequent chapters?.Crows are usually symbolic of death, one only needs to have witnessed them on road kill or seen a painting by Bosch or Breugel.

Odd thing is that for the past several months I've been having dreams of being lost in a city (not always the same one) which is so familiar & yet not. I generally wake up just when it seems I am about to figure out how to get where I am going. This story resonates particularly w/ me for that reason. Now I'm going to keep my eye open for Delilah