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I enjoyed this first work of yours, so thank you. I'd like to suggest that you find an editor for your future work, as I found the many errors distracted me from the story. For example, if Jenny was a psychologist, then she would be a PhD, and would refer to her self as Dr. Appiah, not "Jenny". Your punctuation could use some work, given the many missing commas and misplaced question marks. I'm not trying to be harsh, but this 'good' story could have been 'very good' if your readers didn't have to read around the errors. Thanks!

Liked this!! I would love to see the therapist humiliate him, maybe make him masturbate in front of her and the receptionist!!!