by JohnHerr48
A beautiful story if a bit short at the end; love is love and the world needs all it can get
Thank you. Yes...I am working on sticking my endings better. I am very new to this writing thing. So complete amateur, literally the Finding Miss Amy Series was the first thing I ever truly wrote since being forced to write papers and such in college (my Creative Writing Professor would be shocked...my writing in her class was atrocious). I appreciate the feedback, and yes, love is a beautiful thing.
Nice storyline. The author taking his time writing this and the detail. Of the story.
Loved this story. I usually prefer to see stories of boys or men experiencing bodily and sexual changes as they hormonally become and enjoy becoming gurls and women.
great story
Usually the TS ramrods the poor virgin guy, you had her sweet, patient and loving from the start. I think its a great love story.
thank you
Thank you - yes...I see those "ramrod" stories alot. But honestly, in my fantasy, while sometimes yes, I think about that....honestly, I think that would damage me badly....so if this were ever to miraculously come true for me, i'd want it to be like this! Thanks for the feedback!
Such a great story! John is such a lucky husband. Some of us guys need a strong, dominant woman in our lives. Women who smoke cigarettes definitely qualify as strong and dominant, not to mention feminine and sexy. The fact that Monique has a big, hard penis makes her even more strong and more powerful. I'm so glad these two found each other!