All Comments on 'Transferred to Dayton'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
very nice

We need a follow up on this story! Funny as hell!

HardBenHardBenover 4 years ago
Wow

What an experience....ha ha

Some girl eh!

Fabulously written and erotic story.

Just loved it and very jealous of that amazing night !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Ugh can you please rewrite this without all of your side commentary? Who wants a firsthand look into a guy’s mind? Seriously cut to the chase

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Way overwritten. You need an editor. I literally fell asleep. My god you love to type.

thigh_highthigh_highover 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous on 8/18/2021: I'm glad you enjoy voting down stories you didn't read, and hope you now feel better after your nap.

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As I'm sure all authors do, I write stories I would like to read. That means there's lots of build up before the climax (using that word in two senses). I also want my readers to get their money's worth :-), so anything I write won't be short. Unlike some more prolific write...