All Comments on 'Transformations and Takeovers Pt. 01'

Not bad for your first story. You have taken up the plant story. It has been done many times and I am a fan of these types of stories. I gave you 4 stars because although I liked the story, I didn't see anything different about it. If I may, you need to develop your characters more so the reader can get into the story. If you wanted to keep this story short and sweet, you have succeeded. But, it looks as though that you want to continue this as they are looking for more victims. Also, you could extend the sexual act more. Get more descriptive. Let your mind fly. Thanks for your time and imagination.