All Comments on 'Transformations - The New Gym Pt. 01'

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AnoniemousAnoniemousabout 3 years ago

Cannot believe it's nearly years since someone commented.

A great start and once again the targets are trapped. Shame there aren't more resistant ones out there although forced non consent is not my bag. So a dilemma for me? Slowly working my way through the various series. 5 from me.

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2

Part 2 is in the queue. Look for it a few days after the conclusion of Rose.

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_mealmost 5 years ago
Excellent work...

Totally on par with the rest of the Transformation series. I'm looking g forward to part 2...

5 stars

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionabout 5 years agoAuthor

Yes, we are working on part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Need more

excellent work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story

I can't wait for next part. It is a very good story so far.

richie78richie78almost 6 years ago
Part Two

Hope there's a part two soon when Pam goes home to her hubby

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pushes all my buttons!

Awesome story. Will part 2 be ready soon?

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionover 6 years agoAuthor
On its way

Almost have the second part done. It will be out soon, and we're glad you liked part one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please!

OMG this was so hot I usually don't like these kinds of stories but this has such great potential I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!

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