All Comments on 'Transformations - Travelers Ch. 03'

I already know that this story is awesome!!!!

Fucking gorgeous! I love the definition of Whoremaster you put in there. Thank you both, again!

This was a great chapter in the Transformations saga! I like how the puzzle pieces are starting to show the fuller picture. I also can't wait to see what happens with Nancy, I think her future is sealed but you two might surprise me.

The story is coming along nicely. I can't wait for the next part when they are in Cuba, keep up the good work! Thanks.

Another weird but great instalment. I have no idea how you keep control over all the characters. Slowly moving towards some crescendo. Maria's working her plans and I wonder how the merged Britney / Britt will work out.

Well done again.

GREAT as usual, i agree i do not understand how you are juggling so may different characters at one time. You do a great job with it though.

We wanted a feeling of organized chaos like the beginning of the old Airport movies: numerous people with their own stories thrown together. Many of the stories to follow will focus on small groups (Second Book of Adam, Demonica, and Hellstorm) while the finales (Aeternus Ascendant and Ad Astra) will have major characters from all of the books interacting... I'm tired just thinking about it :).

Hopefully there isn't the gap between chapters next time but damn this was a good read.

IMO this is the next chapter in the Maria/Slutznet story that started at the Galleria Mall.

Starting to re-read Morpheus. I wonder if I will finish it before Travelers?

Chapter 4 is about halfway complete. Hoping to finish this weekend.

I was hoping that when Baphista but that guys cock and some venom went into him....he'd change into a futa or a demon like Baphista

:) patience, Anonymous, patience…

You think they would let THAT plot thread just dangle? The frat president's life is going to get VERY interesting unless I miss my guess.

@JamieCTaylor, LOL...

Can't wait!

This entire series is incredible and the only reason I look at literotica monthly. On one hand I hope you guys end it the in a satisfying way, and in another I hope you just don't end it at all.

Thanks, Anonymous, ending the series will be bittersweet... but it's quite a way off. The final two books in the series are already planned out and we really don't think you will be disappointed in the endings. But, again, that's a long way off. There are still a lot of stories to tell in this universe.

And, after that? We have other universes ;).

ETA on chapter 4? ;-)

Are we there yet? Are we there yet?

We’re at 12000 words. Hopefully it will drop this week.

Can't wait!

Hoping it’ll drop soon 😏

"The suspense is terrible. I hope it lasts" - Willie Wonka

Lol... Willie Wonka... Sorry, guys, lost a boot drive last week - nothing got lost but it slowed us down a bit. Soon, I promise.

"He then opened a side door and pulled out a bizarre looking helmet. It looked almost like a plastic crown. It had an articulated arm attached to it holding a gleaming steel needle. He placed it over her head and plugged it in to a cable on the bed. The helmet had earphones that covered Jessica's ears and a visor that covered her face.

The robot arm whirred and clicked. It moved through several gyrations, then it angled the needle toward a spot on Jessica's scalp.

The needle drove into her skull."

We've come a long way from Witnesses, haven't we? No pretense of choice was shilled then

No choice is being offered now, merely the illusion of choice which is even more nefarious.

That's kind of the point.

Dear Sirs or Madame.

I am concerned about an aircraft left suspended in mid air, thousands of feet over the ocean with no discernable time of arrival. No discernable momentum either. This is defying the laws of time and space.

I hope you give this matter the attention it deserves.

yours Truly,

A Nony Mouse(Someday I hope to be THE Nony Mouse)

You two always deliver a superior story. I continue to applaud and appreciate your and your Muses' imaginations and creative abilities to bring it to your stories. As always, a giant thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Dude, I am so in love with this shit

@JamieCTaylor... LOL! We're getting there - Chapter 4 is verry LOOOONG!

Can you at least give notice with Chapter 4 is about to go live so I can re-read the first three chapters to remember who everyone is?

Can we get a little snippet for that “website” ? I think we all are on the edge of our seat for the transformation me series !

The snippet will go up this weekend, probably on Sunday. We will be submitting the last chapter to the Lit queue this weekend as well. We're over 30k words on this section, so it probably should have been broken into two pieces.

Thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!

Any day now. Patience.....patience............

Patience is a virtue and we're a load of sinners.

Is Literotica that slow or did you change your plans to submit last weekend?

I wonder how many of you are like me and check daily (usually twice a day for me) to see if anything is uploaded

And Chapter 4 is in the queue. It came out to... 44,000 words. I know it's nuts. I know it should have been broken into two pieces (at least). In any event, I'll let you know as soon as Lit gives me a projected publish date. In the meantime, the first 7,000 words or so are on that other site... Thanks for sticking with us!

Not sure why my last comment didn't show up... The last chapter is in the queue and Lit says it will go live 10/24.

It came out to around 45,000 words - sorry, we should have broken this up into at least two chapters :).

And, yes, the first 7000 words is... elsewhere.

What Do you mean by elsewhere?

Anonymous, contact us through our profile on Literotica.