All Comments on 'Transformed by My Toys'

Amazing story. I also really enjoyed some of your work at Smashwords.

I'd love to hear more about this company!

I don't usually enjoy bimbofication stories, but this has proven the exception. You did a good job of changing the tone of the narrative with her transformation.

top drawer

Need part two of her at the company!

Just tooooo unbelievable

Enjoyed the story. More about the company and the other 9 winners would be good. Maybe even have other win es be different genders.

Bhib bgu

That is a quite brilliantly written story. Loved it. Thanks :)

Amazing, wish there were a part 2 and more, maybe with a new girl, or following up with Lizzy.

wished i was Lizzy :)

Well, overall the story was really hot. Unfortunately the sex with John was too soon and too quick. There should have been a longer buildup before she is about to lose her mind even after trying the larger toys. She could have been walking around with a vibrating dildo in her pussy and ass along with a vibrating butterfly on her clit. As she walks around a park or building, she comes several times with her dripping down her legs. She finally calls the company and that is when she gets visited by someone (or someones) that would explain some questions she has. The bimbo cream and pills will eventually make her a total slut as she makes a lot of videos: bdsm, toys, gangbangs, gloryholes, etc.