All Comments on 'Transforming Daughter-in-Law Pt. 01'

by L. Cadarn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
HOT~

Wow!! Keep on CUMming up with more stories! Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great

Glad to see you writing again!!!

fumunda cheezefumunda cheezealmost 20 years ago
What Happened?

Why does this father hate his son so much that he would do this to him? What did his son do to him? Keep dad awake at night when he was a baby? Maybe mom's pussy was never the same?

Some motherfucker that would do this to his son, and drug his daughter in law just to fuck her should get prostate cancer, and never be able to fuck again for the rest of his miserable life.

I hope in the story that the father is found out by the son, does not turn into a wimp, cuckolded, worthless cumsucker, and never has a fucking thing to do with this worthless bastard father, ever again. A man like Marty is a sorry excuse for a human being if there ever was one. If the wife starts to deceive and enjoy this too, then the boy should divorce her slut ass and find someone else, never having a god damned thing to do with either of them again, except to piss and shit on his father's grave after he dies.

The story will however, probably have Marty knocking Hiroku up several times, and the son raising the bastard children, and putting them through college.

Gary

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
SO SAD ! ! !

We agree with What Happened. A man that drugs his son's wife in order to make her sleep with him is mentally deranged. If this is what the author dreams about, SO SAD. We make love to a loving man and not to a sex pervert, expecially one that has to use drugs on us. We hope the daughter-in-law and son survive this and the father is sent to prison where other men can use him without drugs.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU

Velvet kittenVelvet kittenalmost 20 years ago
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM loved it

great story i loved it.. don't stop continue on please!!

encore! :) - *Velvet kitten*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great erotic story

Great story! Can't wait for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
its a great story !

Hi !

I think the story was reallly reallllly nice. it was highly enjoyable. Being a girl myself, I think the daughter-in-law wanted him too, the drug lowers her resistance, it doesnt create anything new, but enhances whatever is already existent. I like the way the whole inter-racial concept and the incestous concept have been blended . the visuals that this story evokes are good too ! Keep up the good work !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
FATHER IS A SICK WORTHLESS BASTARD

Why does this father hate his son so much that he would do this to him? What did his son do to him? Keep dad awake at night when he was a baby? Maybe mom's pussy was never the same?

Some motherfucker that would do this to his son, and drug his daughter in law just to fuck her should get prostate cancer, and never be able to fuck again for the rest of his miserable life.

I hope in the story that the father is found out by the son, does not turn into a wimp, cuckolded, worthless cumsucker, and never has a fucking thing to do with this worthless bastard father, ever again. A man like Marty is a sorry excuse for a human being if there ever was one. If the wife starts to deceive and enjoy this too, then the boy should divorce her slut ass and find someone else, never having a god damned thing to do with either of them again, except to piss and shit on his father's grave after he dies.

The story will however, probably have Marty knocking Hiroku up several times, and the son raising the bastard children, and putting them through college.

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

Need to check your flow. Chapter 2 started with the FIL being an ex-Marine. Two or three paragraphs later, he’s Army? I know thus is Nonconcent/ Reluctance, but damn that’s the DIL. But then, he’s marine/Army who raped an Okinawan girl the threatened violence? Sick, even in this category

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