All Comments on 'Transforming Genevieve Ch. 05'

Very well written. Using names instead of "babe" would've made it more intimate, I think. Keep writing about Gen's experiences, Tex

but she might as well get used to that feeling of feeling dirty...the way she is going she will fell that way many times ....some great sex maybe but she has to realize men become possessive of their pussy ..when they dont get it exclusively as they want ...they get shitty just like women do .....likee i said get used to it ...she would be better off just being an escort

totally depraved fuck slut whore - I hope she gets AID's or an STD - she deserves to. Only trouble is - just like any slut, they will spread it about. At least whores get a regular check up.

Impeccable style. Great story. Thank you so much for first person woman's point of view.

This chapter is characterized by plenty of plot and character development, and concludes with the somewhat zigzagging emotions of the main character Genevieve. The love scene in this chapter is quite brief, in contrast to the previous chapter, and this is quite deliberate on the part of the author, and fully justified in the context of the plot. One of the better things about this entire story is that the author does not rush anything, and takes his time to develop the plot. With a poor author, this would be tedious, but with a talented writer like this one, it is completely enjoyable and at times riveting. Wonderful storytelling.