All Comments on 'Transforming Sassy'

Dumb. Dumb. Dumb. Could have been hot. Nice little premise. But the uncle's caricature of behavior and insipid dialogue just made it stupid. Try running it by an editor next time, and you could have a winner. Just not this time.

Not going to lie you have something here just to have him bring everyone in the Family then turn out her dad is OK and fucks her too just have the uncle be a asshole her mom gets her brothers to stop and everyone be OK and also don't have the uncle fuck her mom to makes the brother look like a cuck

Next time add a warning that non consenting rape and abuse would be part of the story. Couldn't read past it, nor enjoyed it.

Don't worry about all the people who post hate to you. The story was good, and maybe a little crude but very enjoyable. Keep up the good work and keep writing.