All Comments on 'Transport Ship Arrowhead'

Barret/Berret! This was a good story with carry through potential but you forgot the golden rule "read correct, read correct then read again." Read aloud if possible it not only catches the small errors that are easy to miss but help you spot the bits that could be difficult to read, not a problem in this story. On the whole you have a nice easy style, liked the story and look forward to possible further adventures of Vas and James.

This story is very good. Could be the start of a series. I hope to see more of Vas and James' adventures.

This story is very good. Could be the start of a series. I hope to see more of Vas and James' adventures.

Very well written story with believable politics and tech. Looking forward to the rest!

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