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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs A Lot of Work

In terms of the story I found it interesting. In terms of how well written it was I found it very poor. Did you write more than one draft? If you went through several drafts you really need to have someone edit for you.

Downtown3211Downtown3211over 3 years ago
Cum

It made my orgasm intense.💦💦

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great concept

Loved the story!

Tess (UK)

EmirusEmirusover 2 years ago

I can’t say anything better about this story than you captured the feel of it absolutely right 👍 and I can’t agree with the anonymous comment that the story needs a lot of work 😡 although improvements could be made. This type of story doesn’t need a lot of embellishment.

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I can’t use my usual complaint 🙄 because there are only two examples.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Ohhhhhhh to be trapped … yes please. 5* loved it!

AnnalovesitAnnalovesitabout 2 months ago

Naughty Louise.

Loved it.

Anna

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Some of my stories are true, some are fantasies, some are a mixture of the two! I mostly write in the fetish category but am working my way through a few other categories Not looking for hook ups or anything else I'm happy in a relationship. Quick note for those that have...