All Comments on 'Trapped'

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FreakSlaveFreakSlaveabout 3 years ago

Now there's exactly what I'd have done in similare circumstances... but, would have wanted to any way, even in "normal" life... My friend could have taken me any time he wanted... The accident simply opened the door.

The line, "Cocks are simple minded" is a fantastic saying... I've always been of the mind that, for the homophobes, their cocks don't care who's holes they're fucking, even another guy's mouth or ass, as long as it's in a warm hole. It's really only their minds that prevent them from doing what is a ntural, primal instinct. Me? I love a good cock as much as I love pussy... actually, even more... so, sucking cock and having one breed me is awesome!

Keep writing! Let's get more on this story as it unfolds!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Unlikely

People do not get frisky in 15 degrees minus of frost. I was unable to overcome my realism about cold in heaterless cars. It is too miserable. Another excuse for men to be sexual with each other would have made it more plausible. SBG you have stretched my mind beyond credulity. Your porn is entertaining, your knowledge of cold’s effects is poor. However, as the men head into warmth we can start to believe the premise of the story. Call me Mr Cold in Canada

RSchwulerRSchwulerabout 3 years ago
hot story

Hot and fun story. Hope we get a part two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I'm so excited to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Another brilliant story from a fantastic writer! Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)

timmy67timmy67about 3 years ago

Very well presented, even if a little unlikely

SluttyBisexualGuySluttyBisexualGuyabout 3 years agoAuthor
Critical Idiots

To the anonymous critic who had issues with “cold in 15 degree below temps.” First of all, your reading comprehension is shit. I sad it was 15 degrees, not 15 below. The car had been blasting the heater, they had two thermal sleeping bags, blankets, and a handle of whiskey. I’m sorry that you have trouble getting hard up there in Canada when it gets cold. Never been an issue for me. I once camped in the snow and had very good sex during a very frigid night. But hey, what do I know? I’m just a Literotica author who has never had a story fail to be rated Hot with thousands of followers and your a Canadian with chilly performance anxiety. Sorry this entirely free content that you pay nothing for didn’t match your suspension of disbelief. Might I recommend you extricate the stick from your Canuck fuck hole.

WritDark29WritDark29about 3 years ago
"Hot" and humorous!!

Hot sex scenes mixed with hilarious turns of phrase -- "their cell service was like a stoic, Mormon town—zero bars"! This is a nice contribution! Hope to see a followup chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Editing and Review lacking but plot sexy

With just a little more vocabulary and attention to spelling, grammar, and construction this would have been an easier read. The plot was very good. The idea of being fucked by a smooth, muscled man with a hard cock is very sexy to me. The trapped scenario (or camping) is awesome. My own cock got hard just thinking about how much heat I would love to generate if that happened to me.

RobJasperRobJasperabout 3 years ago
Hot and fun!

Hot and fun story with great physical descriptions! I bet there is more lusty trio sex ahead in the cabin!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story - looking forward to read what happens next!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Warmed me up...

Nice story...look forward to reading more of what happens...

AlexpaulAlexpaulabout 3 years ago

It’s three in the morning and I’m horny and hard reading this. Get me that chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Excellent read

Great story, keep writing! My favorite is still "Her Boyfriend Sub In" -I love to have a girl in the action, but you seldom disappoint! Looking forward to Chapter 2!

dodgeboy2dodgeboy2about 3 years ago
Great story

Excellent, I guess if it was me I would gladly have been the bottom or top either way would be good. Getting fucked & saving a life how could it get any better :).

BaraTiddiesBaraTiddiesabout 3 years ago

Hot. I hope Dan's cock can get them even warmer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Bravissimo! Really LOVED it (❤+): ☆☆☆☆☆+ [5+ (5.25/5=105% "Exceeds expectations")! I have been bi curious since god knows when but was too shy to experiment. Also where & when I was growing up everybosy and his brother knew everything about ev

Thank you for this story, SluttyBisexualGuy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

👍👍!

Jd2800606Jd2800606about 3 years ago

I love your stories. I go crazy with stories like yours!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Looking forward to the continuation

Would love to read how the boys and Dan keep each other warm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Sequels

More with Dan and then another with lots of group sex after getting caught by the girl they mentioned early on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You need to make a sequel with cabin man dominating them

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great possibilities for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is there going to be a sequel????

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dude, the was the hottest story I have read on here… Please continue!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very sexy -- and now that they have been rescued, maybe Dan can show them a good time in bed and vice versa. Dan is older, and could be a muscular hairy-chested man. Great story line! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

excellent descriptive writing. had me salivating at the mental pictures i was getting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue!

Iam_nympho69Iam_nympho69over 2 years ago

This is so hot! I want to follow what will happen next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I need more!

MeowzerMeowzerover 2 years ago

Great story! As I was reading I was really, seriously hoping they’d be rescued by some hot guy who’d fuck eventually fuck Benji, and then give Gio his turn at Benji. Great writing this time.

Brahms21Brahms21about 2 years ago

Damn this is hot too🥵. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can't wait to read Part 2, should be a fun read!

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

Very well written and very factual in that shared body heat is the best way to keep from freezing. I know if I was trapped like that I’d let my buddy fuck my ass to stay alive. Of course I would really enjoy it also. HEHEHE (yeah if you didn’t guess I’m a total bottom)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

@ShortyMac: have you ever been in a weather related life or death situation such as this one? If not, neither have I.

sissyboi69Aricsissyboi69Aricabout 2 years ago

good survival techniques by you bois

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

Anonymous I’ve never been in a life or death situation before like the story told, but I grew up in northern Oregon and all the adult men in my family told me if ever I got caught in that position BODY HEAT would keep me alive. If I was caught in a position like that I’d do EXACTLY like they did. Mmmm 😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

@ShortyMac: The older men in your family gave you some good advice. Shared body heat would be the only logical approach until proper help were to arrive, of course. I think Gio and Benji took the situation too far though. In my opinion, I think it would be tough for me to get an erection and sustain it in such harsh weather conditions. Then again, I would have to test that theory one day. So you're from Oregon, how are winters there? I've never been. My handle is BlackSack, by the way! Nice to meet you, Shorty!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. My fuck buddy(female) says she wants to watch me get fucked by a real cock! She has pegged me with great enthusiasm! Real cock sounds great!

MarkbikeMarkbikealmost 2 years ago

Great story and I love the slow build-up. They were definitely wise to share their body heat and it's hardly surprising that they both got excited. The sex is really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

HURRY UP WITH PART 2. !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Must be a threesome happening in this cabin!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fucking hot 🥵

StywelatStywelatover 1 year ago

Where's the follow-up?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gio and Benji might be lucky if Dan is willing to take them on, and the three of them can make love with each other. Bearded big man Dan should have a great hairy chest to keep the boys warm as well. A stroke of luck!

REDtheRed77REDtheRed77about 1 year ago

One of the most well written Short Stories I've read in quite some time. It was so great that I got horny and wanted to be one of the characters. I even started to get wet while reading it. Did not even have to masturbate. Even my own booty was excited.

g908114g908114about 1 year ago

great story. Where's part 2 (and more)?

GreenBerryGreenBerry11 months ago

Great story. Give us more with their rescuer!

Rin48Rin4810 months ago

Hell yeah steamy threesome with a Daddy lumberjack!!! Next chapter please!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

So hot

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet865 months ago

Will there be a continuation?!!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE. !!

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

Please continue wanna know more

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