All Comments on 'Trapped'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawgg9 months ago
First He Ravishes, Then He Rescues the Damsel in Distress !

This reminded me of the old children story when Pooh Bear got stuck in a hole after eating too much honey. I like the ambiguity here where the male character helps her but first..... There actually is sequel potential because the rest of the young lfayung lady's life,, she'll. be trying to place a name to the voice. What happens if she meets a man and is almost sure it's him but not absolutely ..

Anyway! Enjoyed the story. Full marks *****

EastCoaster1EastCoaster19 months ago

OK... unless I seriously missed it, WHO WAS THAT MASKED MAN.?!?

LOL...

...yeah, I know it wasn't the Lone Ranger, but she said the voice sounded familiar, and it didn't seem that there was an answer I the story. She did say she'd be listening for the voice in the future, but I wasn'tsure if she meant in her head, or in real life.

If I missed it, I apologize, but I did enjoy the tale and gave it 5 stars.

AaroneousAaroneous9 months ago

An enjoyable quickie … for the heroine, the reader, and the mysterious man. 5*

Slave_StoriesSlave_Stories9 months ago

Before... No question.

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