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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Looks mighty fine, MV

I don't know why the sudden loss of form concerning the Hs.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
came twice

I love elevator fantasies. I haven't experienced one yet, but look forward to it. Your story was great, and I'm thinking I'll have to further pursue my fantasy.

maggie2002maggie2002almost 20 years ago
trapped

Alright second try Shorter this time;-)Great job makes a girl want to get stuck in an elevator. I have written versions of this but never one as hot and good as this one. The Master of erotica wins again;-) Good job

NExt time think glass elevator open to the outside and the possibilities of the lights returning;-)

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