All Comments on 'Trapped at the Reunion Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great, keep it cumming . Thanks from a horny English guy in Wiltshire UK

cat_suckercat_suckeralmost 2 years ago

Can't wait to keep reading more of it! I hope it gets freakier and hornier!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Cool concept and the first test was hot! I wonder who is behind this whole set-up. Maybe their old faculty (coach, Andre’s dad, the principal?)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dear melodramatic_erik, I pulled up your bio before reading this story. I must say you sell yourself short under the words portion. Your English is excellent, you're extremely gifted at writing, and when it comes to sex, you say you're not super experienced, but your writing says otherwise. Loved everything about this fantastic story. The plot is imaginative, the character interactions are spot on, and the shower sex was HOT AS HELL! Can't wait to read Chapter #2 of this ***** plus story. Thanks, MLF

RobJasperRobJasperalmost 2 years ago

Loved it! Hot description of Chuck and all the sex. Hope we get more descriptions of the other guys in subsequent chapters. Please keep writing!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Can’t wait to find out who’s behind this game of escape room fuck! Great twisted premise.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great use of mood to carry the reader along…. look forward to the next climax.

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Is English my first language? No. Am I particularly gifted at writing? Also no. Am I super experienced when it comes to sex? I sure wish I was. But do those things stop me from writing erotic stuff? Absolutely not. So live bravely and follow your dreams, reader.

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