by melodramatic_erik
Can't wait to keep reading more of it! I hope it gets freakier and hornier!
Cool concept and the first test was hot! I wonder who is behind this whole set-up. Maybe their old faculty (coach, Andre’s dad, the principal?)
Dear melodramatic_erik, I pulled up your bio before reading this story. I must say you sell yourself short under the words portion. Your English is excellent, you're extremely gifted at writing, and when it comes to sex, you say you're not super experienced, but your writing says otherwise. Loved everything about this fantastic story. The plot is imaginative, the character interactions are spot on, and the shower sex was HOT AS HELL! Can't wait to read Chapter #2 of this ***** plus story. Thanks, MLF
Loved it! Hot description of Chuck and all the sex. Hope we get more descriptions of the other guys in subsequent chapters. Please keep writing!
Can’t wait to find out who’s behind this game of escape room fuck! Great twisted premise.
Great use of mood to carry the reader along…. look forward to the next climax.