by JasonClearwater
I was very happy to see this chapter, as I've been thinking for the last couple days how I haven't seen hide nor by hair of you in a while. Nice hot wrap-up to this story!
I was wondering how this was going to end with everything that had been going on. I like the way you folded the dominant play in with the horror theme. I think it was really successful. Thanks for this story!
Jason,
I absolutely love the ride, journey we go on in all of you’re stories. I’ve said that sometimes imma bit uncertain or uncomfortable with where I think the story is going, and then bam..... you turn it into a fantastic ending.. and start for Deacon and Jason.
Thanks soooo much for the story, loved it , hooked reader lol, cheer John.
Oddly, the part of this that took the longest to write, was the last few paragraphs. I think I'm going to write more of these two. :-)
Jase.
I was holding my breath wondering if Deacon was in deed, a psychological killer but he was just a man who was crazy about Jax since the first time he saw him. I hope the writer does write more about them from time to time.
I'm such a big horror/thriller fan, I appreciated this a lot! It's so nice to find an author who knows how to play with that tension and put it through an erotic story like ribbons of caramel through ice scream. ^_^
*ahem* I mean 'cream.'
Definitely glad to have seconded this story for "Most Original Sex Scene" for the forum contest this year!
I was meant to be in bed two hours ago. First chapter then bed, and ended up reading the lot in one go. You're so good you're killing me. Too tired to bestow any further compliments other than I love your humour, I do crack up on occasion!